Additionally, I found it fascinating how meaning slipped into my poem. Originally, my poem began as a simple poem about driving as a right of passage but it began to grasp more emotional meaning with each revision Seeing this transition from junk to something more successful with evident signs of emotions.
Lastly, I never gave enough respect to poetry; I would hear about poetry and think of it jokingly but I now I see the hard work and dedication required for poetry. We went through only a few drafts and it was a long painful process. A poet would have to go through many more drafts to create the masterpieces they create.
Alex, I think this piece is great! It's not always easy to identify changes in your thinking, or how you got from point A to point B, yet you've done so with ease. You've helped a reader understand the value of poetry that they (like you previously) may not have seen. I think it's really admirable that at 16, you're able to see the value in the end result as well as the process getting to said result.
ReplyDeleteIt's great to hear you talking about the power of words and their relation to politics. Maybe one day we'll get to see you implement this knowledge as an elected official! Great job, Alex!